I decided to go the Orange Park mall here in Florida and do a few rough sketches. I didn't have very much time to work with so I only got 3 sketches completed before I had to go. I tried to limit myself in time frame, because I have a bad habit of slowing down and spending too much time on one particular piece.
The first piece was an exterior I did just outside of the entrance to the movie theater. I think I captured most of the important structure and defining traits. However, I do feel that I muddled some of the background too much and it's not as easy to see what's going on back there. I also feel that I horizontally squashed the entire composition.
The second piece was an interior shot I did look out from near the center of a grand atrium. I feel I did a better job here of not squashing everything horizontally, however my work got sloppy near the chairs and tables. It started to feel like I was cramming things in and taking away from the rest of the drawing.
The third was another interior shot I did looking down a hallway from a smaller atrium. I feel I got the perspective best on this one, I decided to simplify some of my work and try and use straight lines as much as I could with curves accenting only where need be. My depth is lost somewhat on the sides, so I'm still obviously squashing some, but I felt happiest with this one.
All in all, my work is alright in my mind, with plenty of room for improvement. I need to gain more confidence when it comes to placing objects within my scenes and I need to do a better job of pre-planning when I am going to be laying in lots of smaller objects such as chairs and tables. These were mostly big open spaces, but I can already see I'd be having many issues in a smaller, more cramped space such as a diner.
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